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~ irreverent place on a laundry room shelf, his is a figure serene. source of comfort? source of peace? perhaps... but oh, so much more than that... this is a crossroads where absolution meets   the gritty mundane, where he became her source of familiarity. *"good morning, Sweet Jesus, i'm just here to wash my ***** laundry."* no sacrilege here, no... nothing profane. from the hand outstretched held out for the taking who is this really, this chalk figurine? in tranquility certain, a doorway between human fragility and perfection divine. in life’s messy journey our ***** laundry aside how could one not feel, more rinsed of life's stains? Sweet Jesus, of course divine cleanser, unseen now, here on my mantle my house feels more clean! ~ *post script. when a fellow treasure-hunter shared not only the story of  "Sweet Jesus" (a hand painted, european, chalk sculpture of a early-last-century, bleeding-heart Christ who was the long-time occupant of her laundry room closet shelf), but also an offer to bring him out of the closet and sell him to me (yes, it's true... i bought him for a few pieces of silver), i jumped at the chance to bring him to my mantle and determined to construct a fitting poem as a way to say, "thank you, Elaine!”  and to say unabashedly to anyone else, “i love my Sweet Jesus!  you are out of the closet... forever!!”* *no sacrilege whatsoever intended i dearly hope you'll not be offended!* :-) Steve
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Feb 26, 2015
Feb 26, 2015 at 12:28 AM UTC
Sweet Jesus
~ irreverent place on a laundry room shelf, his is a figure serene. source of comfort? source of peace? perhaps... but oh, so much more than that... this is a crossroads where absolution meets   the gritty mundane, where he became her source of familiarity. *"good morning, Sweet Jesus, i'm just here to wash my ***** laundry."* no sacrilege here, no... nothing profane. from the hand outstretched held out for the taking who is this really, this chalk figurine? in tranquility certain, a doorway between human fragility and perfection divine. in life’s messy journey our ***** laundry aside how could one not feel, more rinsed of life's stains? Sweet Jesus, of course divine cleanser, unseen now, here on my mantle my house feels more clean! ~ *post script. when a fellow treasure-hunter shared not only the story of  "Sweet Jesus" (a hand painted, european, chalk sculpture of a early-last-century, bleeding-heart Christ who was the long-time occupant of her laundry room closet shelf), but also an offer to bring him out of the closet and sell him to me (yes, it's true... i bought him for a few pieces of silver), i jumped at the chance to bring him to my mantle and determined to construct a fitting poem as a way to say, "thank you, Elaine!”  and to say unabashedly to anyone else, “i love my Sweet Jesus!  you are out of the closet... forever!!”* *no sacrilege whatsoever intended i dearly hope you'll not be offended!* :-) Steve
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Feb 26, 2015
Feb 26, 2015 at 12:28 AM UTC
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