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re-entry

Cold.

I was waiting

but I’ve changed my mind.

The whole world fell away, left just me/us

and it felt OK.

All the stuff I thought mattered;

age-gap, gossip, housing, education-

when it was just me/us- it didn’t.

(she’s awake)

For a moment we were everything.

It was beautiful.

I love me/us- even with

complications pushing

into my mind,

cramming themselves

around me/us euphoria-

I’m not making an Angel today.

Going home.

(what’s she doing?)

Jelly legs aren’t working,

feel hot and slippery.

She’s holding me

down.

(Sshh- you’re fine, just a bit woozy)

I don’t believe in Angels.

Crap.

(it’s the anaesthetic, makes them cry)

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Written by
ju
F
Published
Oct 13, 2011
Lines·Words
27·106
Notes

I wrote blast-off and re-entry after reading "Moondust" by Andrew Smith. Astronauts' descriptions of feelings during and after space travel, remind me very much of experiences with anaesthesia. And obviously, a cup of tea makes everything right again.

https://hellopoetry.com/poem/3983757/blast-off/

https://hellopoetry.com/poem/163180/afternoon-tea/

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#love#loss#angel#abortion#baby#pressure#choices
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