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( or , the illusion of luv ) •                        • •   • You know I guess that what I am trying to ask is Something like : 2 people meet It's a wonderful thing BUT THEN EVERY ******* EVENT ! EVERY ******* EMOTION ! EVERY ******* THOUGHT OR FEELING GETS ANALYSED ! LABELED ! ACCEPTED OR REJECTED ! AND THEN COMES THE UNBELIEVABLY FALSE **** ABOUT BEING LEFT ! BEGGING / PLEASE COME BACK ! THE / I' M BROKEN / HORSESHIT ! |||| Like you're in some tv reality show Playing to an audience In the rom / com genre Of perpetual immaturity AND YOU ACTUALLY COMPETE TO SEE WHO IS BETTER AT WRITING THIS CRAP ! instead of just Meeting Getting to know each other Knowing each other's lives Families Friends Exploring your own perspective Of life Trying to understand someone else's Practicing to be patient Generous Kind • Instead of acting like Zombie robots auditioning for the part Of ******* demon from hell •• It IS baffling // And a bit ugly Watching you die
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Mar 2, 2015
Mar 2, 2015 at 3:29 PM UTC
Luv
( or , the illusion of luv ) •                        • •   • You know I guess that what I am trying to ask is Something like : 2 people meet It's a wonderful thing BUT THEN EVERY ******* EVENT ! EVERY ******* EMOTION ! EVERY ******* THOUGHT OR FEELING GETS ANALYSED ! LABELED ! ACCEPTED OR REJECTED ! AND THEN COMES THE UNBELIEVABLY FALSE **** ABOUT BEING LEFT ! BEGGING / PLEASE COME BACK ! THE / I' M BROKEN / HORSESHIT ! |||| Like you're in some tv reality show Playing to an audience In the rom / com genre Of perpetual immaturity AND YOU ACTUALLY COMPETE TO SEE WHO IS BETTER AT WRITING THIS CRAP ! instead of just Meeting Getting to know each other Knowing each other's lives Families Friends Exploring your own perspective Of life Trying to understand someone else's Practicing to be patient Generous Kind • Instead of acting like Zombie robots auditioning for the part Of ******* demon from hell •• It IS baffling // And a bit ugly Watching you die
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jeffrey-robin
Mar 2, 2015
Mar 2, 2015 at 3:29 PM UTC
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