**Celestial scholars
deliver influencing scripts
days brisk with drumbeats
evenings spilled from riverbanks -
drifts of violet, ripe moons.
A life for living
make creativity your song
let all sorrow go
our tomorrows fade too fast
every moment so precious
Your choices to own
claim to have truly lived
be free like a bird
soar to the highest mountain
feel the breeze beneath your wings
All will surely die
your body is not a chore
the energy life
is eternal, infinite
and clothed in velvet breathing
Life's ageing busy pace
relax - observe and still time
neither thoughts nor none
hum a song about the stars
or astronomy lessons
Dwell in loving peace
share spiritual sustenance
imperfect mirage—
unbend, barefoot in its shade
languid afternoons, blessings.
Hearing poetry's grace
Echoes that laugh-lust-cry-love
relentlessly true.
Souls rapture joined - bestowed
kiss softly devastating.
A world awakes
in spaces of wonderment.
Slows worries until -
our eyes open: Surprise Splendors
Treating earth like a lover**
**Refining senses -
resilient beauty touched**.
*???
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???*
Submit your 2 line 5/7 challenging verses then your 3 line 5/7/7 answering verses in a 'reaction' please
.
May 17, 2010
May 17, 2010 at 11:29 AM UTC
**Celestial scholars
deliver influencing scripts
days brisk with drumbeats
evenings spilled from riverbanks -
drifts of violet, ripe moons.
A life for living
make creativity your song
let all sorrow go
our tomorrows fade too fast
every moment so precious
Your choices to own
claim to have truly lived
be free like a bird
soar to the highest mountain
feel the breeze beneath your wings
All will surely die
your body is not a chore
the energy life
is eternal, infinite
and clothed in velvet breathing
Life's ageing busy pace
relax - observe and still time
neither thoughts nor none
hum a song about the stars
or astronomy lessons
Dwell in loving peace
share spiritual sustenance
imperfect mirage—
unbend, barefoot in its shade
languid afternoons, blessings.
Hearing poetry's grace
Echoes that laugh-lust-cry-love
relentlessly true.
Souls rapture joined - bestowed
kiss softly devastating.
A world awakes
in spaces of wonderment.
Slows worries until -
our eyes open: Surprise Splendors
Treating earth like a lover**
**Refining senses -
resilient beauty touched**.
*???
???
???*
Submit your 2 line 5/7 challenging verses then your 3 line 5/7/7 answering verses in a 'reaction' please
.
copyright©[email protected] 2010 --- a renga written in collaboration with Marsha Singh, Aiden L K Riverstone, eileen ann bridget mcgreevy, Del Maximo, Jacqueline Ivascu, Christopher Terry Everson & ???