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The man looked deep into himself, He saw a man with no control. If a drink passed his eyes, Or a joint passed his nose, And he crumbles under pressure. The man knew he had to stop, But the temptations continued. The day he quit, he duly celebrated, With a special story he just wrote. He kept writing and found a new vice. His writing was his drugs, And he was stuck again.
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Nov 26, 2011
Nov 26, 2011 at 7:03 PM UTC
“Control”
The man looked deep into himself, He saw a man with no control. If a drink passed his eyes, Or a joint passed his nose, And he crumbles under pressure. The man knew he had to stop, But the temptations continued. The day he quit, he duly celebrated, With a special story he just wrote. He kept writing and found a new vice. His writing was his drugs, And he was stuck again.
ryan-winkler
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Nov 26, 2011
Nov 26, 2011 at 7:03 PM UTC
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