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I punctuate with close precision, aware of where I'm placing my semi-colons and dashes, using Oxford commas like a grammar geek. Your punctuation always bothers me but you, with your misplaced apostrophes and oddly abbreviated words that you cradle in speech marks, never care. You were constantly callous in your conduct, your handling of punctuation marks. I assumed you never understood the significance I attached to your words. I could feel the excitement and anxiety and apprehension build in my belly every time with your exclamation points! I could feel my brows furrow together deep in confusion, every time you sent me just one little question mark? I suppose I never did tell you this but when last month you ended your sentence (accidentally, of course) with a dash, well, I knew then that we’d be for ever. and when last week you sent me a comma to end your speech I knew for certain that more was to come. but I see now it was silly to attach such hope to a hyphen because yesterday you concluded with the biggest full stop I've ever seen and let me know that that was all. I felt that period’s punch deep inside my gut like you were trying to make me throw up my jam and toast. I had never before known one small, simple dot to be so powerful and hurt so much. It did though, and you couldn't even tell-
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Jul 13, 2014
Jul 13, 2014 at 3:56 AM UTC
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I punctuate with close precision, aware of where I'm placing my semi-colons and dashes, using Oxford commas like a grammar geek. Your punctuation always bothers me but you, with your misplaced apostrophes and oddly abbreviated words that you cradle in speech marks, never care. You were constantly callous in your conduct, your handling of punctuation marks. I assumed you never understood the significance I attached to your words. I could feel the excitement and anxiety and apprehension build in my belly every time with your exclamation points! I could feel my brows furrow together deep in confusion, every time you sent me just one little question mark? I suppose I never did tell you this but when last month you ended your sentence (accidentally, of course) with a dash, well, I knew then that we’d be for ever. and when last week you sent me a comma to end your speech I knew for certain that more was to come. but I see now it was silly to attach such hope to a hyphen because yesterday you concluded with the biggest full stop I've ever seen and let me know that that was all. I felt that period’s punch deep inside my gut like you were trying to make me throw up my jam and toast. I had never before known one small, simple dot to be so powerful and hurt so much. It did though, and you couldn't even tell-
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Jul 13, 2014
Jul 13, 2014 at 3:56 AM UTC
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