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Love, love at first sight Saw her under the moonlight I just can't think straight Went sleepless the whole night She struck me like storm and thrown me off guard Days without staring at her are surprisingly too hard My heart is inflicted every minute with the thoughts of her And with time ticking away the pain sever Without realization I had exhausted all my affection Giving her every bit of my attention Every simplest of her pouts Raises " Is she a angel" kinda of doubts Just a flip of her hair Turns out to pull me out of my despair At the end my heart feels both Grateful to experience such fluttering feelings And troubled to think about me and her future dealings
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Apr 3
Apr 3, 2026 at 11:41 AM UTC
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Love, love at first sight Saw her under the moonlight I just can't think straight Went sleepless the whole night She struck me like storm and thrown me off guard Days without staring at her are surprisingly too hard My heart is inflicted every minute with the thoughts of her And with time ticking away the pain sever Without realization I had exhausted all my affection Giving her every bit of my attention Every simplest of her pouts Raises " Is she a angel" kinda of doubts Just a flip of her hair Turns out to pull me out of my despair At the end my heart feels both Grateful to experience such fluttering feelings And troubled to think about me and her future dealings
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Apr 3
Apr 3, 2026 at 11:41 AM UTC
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