All this face
With no lace 
Running a race
With no place
All this nerves
Rejecting life & 
All its space

sheku-sheriff

Suicide

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jessie

i like the rhymes, but i don't see the connection with suicide...maybe i'm not looking deeply enough?

september

My reaction is almost identical to Jessie's. It's got great flow and rhyme, but where does suicide come it?

removed.-2z

There's a great short poem, "Suicide's Note" by Langston Hughes: " The cool calm face of the river, asked me for a kiss. " Without the title it seems strange and almost pleasant. With the title, the meaning bursts right out (for some people at least) . I think you've achieved that here in a different way. Anyway, I really liked your poem. The title works to add meaning to this and not the other way round where the title would otherwise be a mere reflection of the poem. Great work!