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I felt the warmth caress my cheek like the light of heaven radiating down on me. Looking up I saw my mother, with eyes blue, and a dress smudged by her youth. Laughter and love streaked down my face and it could be said this moment was infinite in all of its grandeur. But we knew of this falsehood, for god left for the stars and you were my angel, but the men took you too. They marched in; their tin guns rattling to a tune I didn't know. The storm grew on until finally, I looked and saw mother taken into its gaping maw. My limp retreat, hastened by the need to escape the reality laid before me. As the sad scurried escape continued, I felt my most intimate seams begin to tear. The contents of my creator spilling onto the cold ground. Those tin toy soldiers surrounded me, and I realized something. “A ragdoll can't flee” With an air of vengeance, I took their bait; biting down on the cursed fruit bestowed to me by our nonexistent savior. With a smile I split my seam and screamed out to all the fallen toys, and fallen joys. “Hush now men, mother, and me this is life; this is love, and can't you see what it doe-” My thought grew dark as a cold tin soldier finished the job, and I joined my mother within the ash. I felt the warmth caress my cheek like the light of heaven radiating down on me. Looking up I saw my mother, with eyes blue, and a dress smudged by her youth. Laughter and love streaked down my face and it could be said this moment was infinite in all of its grandeur. But we knew of this falsehood, for god left for the stars and you were my angel, but the men took you too. They marched in; their tin guns rattling to a tune I didn't know. The storm grew on until finally, I looked and saw mother taken into its gaping maw. My limp retreat, hastened by the need to escape the reality laid before me. As the sad scurried escape continued, I felt my most intimate seams begin to tear. The contents of my creator spilling onto the cold ground. Those tin toy soldiers surrounded me, and I realized something. “A ragdoll can't flee” With an air of vengeance, I took their bait; biting down on the cursed fruit bestowed to me by our nonexistent savior. With a smile I split my seam and screamed out to all the fallen toys, and fallen joys. “Hush now men, mother, and me this is life; this is love, and can't you see what it doe-” My thought grew dark as a cold tin soldier finished the job, and I joined my mother within the ash.
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Apr 7, 2014
Apr 7, 2014 at 5:10 PM UTC
A Ragdoll Obstructed
I felt the warmth caress my cheek like the light of heaven radiating down on me. Looking up I saw my mother, with eyes blue, and a dress smudged by her youth. Laughter and love streaked down my face and it could be said this moment was infinite in all of its grandeur. But we knew of this falsehood, for god left for the stars and you were my angel, but the men took you too. They marched in; their tin guns rattling to a tune I didn't know. The storm grew on until finally, I looked and saw mother taken into its gaping maw. My limp retreat, hastened by the need to escape the reality laid before me. As the sad scurried escape continued, I felt my most intimate seams begin to tear. The contents of my creator spilling onto the cold ground. Those tin toy soldiers surrounded me, and I realized something. “A ragdoll can't flee” With an air of vengeance, I took their bait; biting down on the cursed fruit bestowed to me by our nonexistent savior. With a smile I split my seam and screamed out to all the fallen toys, and fallen joys. “Hush now men, mother, and me this is life; this is love, and can't you see what it doe-” My thought grew dark as a cold tin soldier finished the job, and I joined my mother within the ash. I felt the warmth caress my cheek like the light of heaven radiating down on me. Looking up I saw my mother, with eyes blue, and a dress smudged by her youth. Laughter and love streaked down my face and it could be said this moment was infinite in all of its grandeur. But we knew of this falsehood, for god left for the stars and you were my angel, but the men took you too. They marched in; their tin guns rattling to a tune I didn't know. The storm grew on until finally, I looked and saw mother taken into its gaping maw. My limp retreat, hastened by the need to escape the reality laid before me. As the sad scurried escape continued, I felt my most intimate seams begin to tear. The contents of my creator spilling onto the cold ground. Those tin toy soldiers surrounded me, and I realized something. “A ragdoll can't flee” With an air of vengeance, I took their bait; biting down on the cursed fruit bestowed to me by our nonexistent savior. With a smile I split my seam and screamed out to all the fallen toys, and fallen joys. “Hush now men, mother, and me this is life; this is love, and can't you see what it doe-” My thought grew dark as a cold tin soldier finished the job, and I joined my mother within the ash.
A poem written, and obstructed for class.
Shin
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30/M/American
Apr 7, 2014
Apr 7, 2014 at 5:10 PM UTC
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