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Actions not words, new lesson learned.. or trying at least. It's a hard one to swallow when it means so much more.. More to my heart.. To my health.. To my life... To question the actions of the one I hold dear.. I don't want to see, to look, or believe. Could you be... only words? You couldn't... You wouldn't.. be just like her?.. Her, a girl who cared for me not, but her words spun a web in which I got caught. Took a year to untangle, brush the cobs from my eyes To look at her actions and cast aside all the lies I tell myself now, never again But could you be.. only words? You couldn't.. You wouldn't .. just make believe? If so, I dont want to know, I'll just let it be. The truth would hurt more, or I'll die and then see. You couldnt.. You wouldn't.. do that to me?..
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Aug 7, 2010
Aug 7, 2010 at 12:39 PM UTC
Lessons Learned. Wasted Words
Actions not words, new lesson learned.. or trying at least. It's a hard one to swallow when it means so much more.. More to my heart.. To my health.. To my life... To question the actions of the one I hold dear.. I don't want to see, to look, or believe. Could you be... only words? You couldn't... You wouldn't.. be just like her?.. Her, a girl who cared for me not, but her words spun a web in which I got caught. Took a year to untangle, brush the cobs from my eyes To look at her actions and cast aside all the lies I tell myself now, never again But could you be.. only words? You couldn't.. You wouldn't .. just make believe? If so, I dont want to know, I'll just let it be. The truth would hurt more, or I'll die and then see. You couldnt.. You wouldn't.. do that to me?..
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Aug 7, 2010
Aug 7, 2010 at 12:39 PM UTC
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