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The pain is felt As she, the preeminent archeologist knelt Before the porch And the holder of the torch Of a land, once beautiful Protected by the dutiful Vibrant cultures which would fall with a thud A price paid with disease and blood From this would rise a new culture The ancient morsels scavenged by this vulture Manifest destiny was the rule of the land Smothered and choked by a cold hand Created by terror, torture and fears Remaining in place for hundreds of years A promise of liberty and justice, but not for all The reason for this culture's eventual fall This was not the story her digs appeared to tell For liberty was the name of that cracked bell Hymn's proclaiming the land of the free And a constitution that begins with "We..." As she gazed towards the sky She could not fathom why What on earth made this lady cry? "Give me your tired, your poor" Welcoming all upon her shore This was the message upon her door Gazing upon her once hopeful eyes She soon began to realize Perhaps, they were not all knowing and wise And for too long believed their own lies It was this realization Of this ancient nation Which helped her see The tears shed by she This lady... Liberty (C) Shawn White Eagle
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Nov 18, 2012
Nov 18, 2012 at 6:07 PM UTC
A Tear She Cried
The pain is felt As she, the preeminent archeologist knelt Before the porch And the holder of the torch Of a land, once beautiful Protected by the dutiful Vibrant cultures which would fall with a thud A price paid with disease and blood From this would rise a new culture The ancient morsels scavenged by this vulture Manifest destiny was the rule of the land Smothered and choked by a cold hand Created by terror, torture and fears Remaining in place for hundreds of years A promise of liberty and justice, but not for all The reason for this culture's eventual fall This was not the story her digs appeared to tell For liberty was the name of that cracked bell Hymn's proclaiming the land of the free And a constitution that begins with "We..." As she gazed towards the sky She could not fathom why What on earth made this lady cry? "Give me your tired, your poor" Welcoming all upon her shore This was the message upon her door Gazing upon her once hopeful eyes She soon began to realize Perhaps, they were not all knowing and wise And for too long believed their own lies It was this realization Of this ancient nation Which helped her see The tears shed by she This lady... Liberty (C) Shawn White Eagle
This was inspired by Lupe Fiasco's "Unforgivable Youth", which I think is a truly powerful piece and I recommend it as a listen, or a read.  It is extremely thoughtful and deep, at least in my most humble opinion.  The words/music created a film in my mind and the ending I saw in that visual  inspired this poem.  I hope U enjoy it.  Live 4 Love
shawn-white-eagle
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Nov 18, 2012
Nov 18, 2012 at 6:07 PM UTC
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