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An auction just last month -- no sale, I guess, for now a square of white on your window says: "Building Condemned, Order of the City..." A salable family place, and there's the pity -- your roof and sills square, the clapboards straight, the windows shining -- but an enemy of the state, apparently, too good to live. So, bang -- you're dead! No one loves you, home. Go hang. A house needs people in it! But your soul's gone, your family fled, flat broke, or simply broken. What a waste -- and one on every street, forlorn, contrite, like jilted brides that none will visit. Still, you're left here, waiting. Who is it loves you now? And not one word is spoken.
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Sep 3, 2012
Sep 3, 2012 at 10:28 PM UTC
To the House on Winter Street
An auction just last month -- no sale, I guess, for now a square of white on your window says: "Building Condemned, Order of the City..." A salable family place, and there's the pity -- your roof and sills square, the clapboards straight, the windows shining -- but an enemy of the state, apparently, too good to live. So, bang -- you're dead! No one loves you, home. Go hang. A house needs people in it! But your soul's gone, your family fled, flat broke, or simply broken. What a waste -- and one on every street, forlorn, contrite, like jilted brides that none will visit. Still, you're left here, waiting. Who is it loves you now? And not one word is spoken.
These abandoned houses make me crazy; perfectly good and yet they'll be torn down. The banks get to write them off, and then, in the next boom cycle, there'll not be enough houses to go around, and the cost will be too high again, remaining out of reach of most families. It's a scam!
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Sep 3, 2012
Sep 3, 2012 at 10:28 PM UTC
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