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Devoted to your second hand Your  electrifying Admonishment   your   embrace   solidifying a    swirling    technicolor    land (move) Meant along your path engroove, bring           error receiver much to be desired
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Jan 31, 2020
Jan 31, 2020 at 7:10 PM UTC
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Devoted to your second hand Your  electrifying Admonishment   your   embrace   solidifying a    swirling    technicolor    land (move) Meant along your path engroove, bring           error receiver much to be desired
just a bit of inspiration. tried for some cummingsesque spacing imagery; wasn't in the mood for a traditional sonnet. i included a bit of wordplay, so have fun picking them out. and yes, on line 2 I intentionally used that form of "your."
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Jan 31, 2020
Jan 31, 2020 at 7:10 PM UTC
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