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I close eyes and count to ten Take shaky breath of air Hesitate to open them Afraid to see you are no longer there I want to make you happy Sometimes that seems so tough Despite golden intentions Efforts are never enough Then we build expectations Late into night At first both exceed them Until sparks ignite fight Yet fire lights lantern To guide way through the dark Ecstasy acts as glowing beacon On weightless journey I embark Your laughter rings like chords in ear You got me above clouds so high Trust earned like a certification Learning to let hang loose fears you untie Teaching to speak with a tender tongue Feeling finer than I have in years I hope that beneath the surface Devotion is as deep as it appears Appreciating your words and savoring Time we have before it disappears
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Aug 26, 2024
Aug 26, 2024 at 5:00 AM UTC
Count To Ten
I close eyes and count to ten Take shaky breath of air Hesitate to open them Afraid to see you are no longer there I want to make you happy Sometimes that seems so tough Despite golden intentions Efforts are never enough Then we build expectations Late into night At first both exceed them Until sparks ignite fight Yet fire lights lantern To guide way through the dark Ecstasy acts as glowing beacon On weightless journey I embark Your laughter rings like chords in ear You got me above clouds so high Trust earned like a certification Learning to let hang loose fears you untie Teaching to speak with a tender tongue Feeling finer than I have in years I hope that beneath the surface Devotion is as deep as it appears Appreciating your words and savoring Time we have before it disappears
My boyfriend read this and crossed out the last line and this is what he replaced it with: I have to kiss your rear I might be just so right That we won't have to fight Don't be scared because we are pretty tight so hear To see, adventures are limitless as our hearts grow closer near <3
AmandaKayBurke
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30/F/Alaska
Aug 26, 2024
Aug 26, 2024 at 5:00 AM UTC
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