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The world's suffocating me from both sides, don't you feel like that sometimes? Like the walls are closing in, and the celling's starting to collapse. And you breathe in and count to four, but you can't take it anymore, and you're not sure how you feel, never want to eat another meal, if you could just be pretty, just be skinny, things wouldn't always end this badly. And you try to call on God, but he ain't responding, and your muscles start to lock in, the weight on your shoulder's is pressing, and did I forget to mention: Everyone's watching, everyone's laughing, oh, look at that, the ceiling's collapsing, and the walls are caving in, this is how it always ends.
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Oct 19, 2025
Oct 19, 2025 at 2:44 PM UTC
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The world's suffocating me from both sides, don't you feel like that sometimes? Like the walls are closing in, and the celling's starting to collapse. And you breathe in and count to four, but you can't take it anymore, and you're not sure how you feel, never want to eat another meal, if you could just be pretty, just be skinny, things wouldn't always end this badly. And you try to call on God, but he ain't responding, and your muscles start to lock in, the weight on your shoulder's is pressing, and did I forget to mention: Everyone's watching, everyone's laughing, oh, look at that, the ceiling's collapsing, and the walls are caving in, this is how it always ends.
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Oct 19, 2025
Oct 19, 2025 at 2:44 PM UTC
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