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i really wanna try i really really do i just can't face the fact of disappointing you i don't know what it is that makes me just not go there's always something else that screws up my entire flow the face of disappointment strikes straight through my heart it takes away my energy and tears my hope apart i don't want that again not for the seventh time a disappointment for every day of the week and sadness will be mine the value of my soul will fall below zero and will become unreachable by any given hero and darkness will fall upon my diminished sun then i will remain the disappointing one and as i lay in this deep and heartless place i am once again dead upon your disappointed face
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Mar 14, 2010
Mar 14, 2010 at 12:34 PM UTC
Disappointment
i really wanna try i really really do i just can't face the fact of disappointing you i don't know what it is that makes me just not go there's always something else that screws up my entire flow the face of disappointment strikes straight through my heart it takes away my energy and tears my hope apart i don't want that again not for the seventh time a disappointment for every day of the week and sadness will be mine the value of my soul will fall below zero and will become unreachable by any given hero and darkness will fall upon my diminished sun then i will remain the disappointing one and as i lay in this deep and heartless place i am once again dead upon your disappointed face
marco-jimenez
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Mar 14, 2010
Mar 14, 2010 at 12:34 PM UTC
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