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You’re looking up now at the little boat in the middle of the sea we call the sky When in the age of game of pirates, loose shorts and crumpled shirts. you patiently murmured hails, many and praises, eyes on the rosary, bunches of caught mystery - glory Oh glorious! joy, Oh joyous! Of one lord sorrow. Oh sorrowful! - pain did accord, the little crucifix was not in discord Beyond this bank, on the other side a childhood friend stands, river astride: One who used to pray with eyes closed, kneeling, head bowed, fervent, deposed: Now eyes, mesmerized, wide opened, by light of this multiverse, brightened, Of what use has the picking pole, then? End! Knowledge’s fruit dropped, unattended Each with a river crossed and forded Each with its own heart exploded!
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Mar 29
Mar 29, 2026 at 9:38 AM UTC
Little boat and cross star in the sky
You’re looking up now at the little boat in the middle of the sea we call the sky When in the age of game of pirates, loose shorts and crumpled shirts. you patiently murmured hails, many and praises, eyes on the rosary, bunches of caught mystery - glory Oh glorious! joy, Oh joyous! Of one lord sorrow. Oh sorrowful! - pain did accord, the little crucifix was not in discord Beyond this bank, on the other side a childhood friend stands, river astride: One who used to pray with eyes closed, kneeling, head bowed, fervent, deposed: Now eyes, mesmerized, wide opened, by light of this multiverse, brightened, Of what use has the picking pole, then? End! Knowledge’s fruit dropped, unattended Each with a river crossed and forded Each with its own heart exploded!
More or less, another attempt at translating my Tagalog poem "Bangka-bangka't krus-krusan sa langit"
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M/Los Baños, Ph
Mar 29
Mar 29, 2026 at 9:38 AM UTC
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