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*3 mice on the tin roof though their minds were on food an impulsive id drove them they swung to different mood! I warned myself here no poetry no story to make out of it let them have in privacy a good time bitterly sweet! 3 mice on the tin roof swayed by their id I should have stayed aloof and not watched them in greed! I told me there’s no poem in the 3 mice and their id leave them alone with their game but my greed paid no heed! It’s not civil not nice to act a peeping Tom see furtively the 3 mice breaching all courteous norms! 3 mice on the tin roof to me I had this to say go your way stay aloof and not venture on their way!*
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Nov 6, 2013
Nov 6, 2013 at 7:14 AM UTC
3 Mice on the Tin Roof
*3 mice on the tin roof though their minds were on food an impulsive id drove them they swung to different mood! I warned myself here no poetry no story to make out of it let them have in privacy a good time bitterly sweet! 3 mice on the tin roof swayed by their id I should have stayed aloof and not watched them in greed! I told me there’s no poem in the 3 mice and their id leave them alone with their game but my greed paid no heed! It’s not civil not nice to act a peeping Tom see furtively the 3 mice breaching all courteous norms! 3 mice on the tin roof to me I had this to say go your way stay aloof and not venture on their way!*
pradip-chattopadhyay
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Nov 6, 2013
Nov 6, 2013 at 7:14 AM UTC
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