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it was like walking outside the day after a windstorm. The chill remained, but no remnant, no sign showed where you wandered. What you left behind offered the only reminder: scattered leaves, road signs askew, an overturned chair. When you were here your presence was a feeling, a touch against the skin, a stroke of hair, a breeze intangible to grasp, insubstantial as an unasked question. Not wishing to go off-kilter I altered my balance, strode forward against the current, brushed the hair away from my eyes. And now – the emptiness is non-empty. The absence recalls what was once there. The space between cause and effect was only a pause. I asked a woman for directions; she said, go down Forbes Avenue and turn left where the 7-Eleven used to be.
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Feb 20, 2015
Feb 20, 2015 at 11:30 AM UTC
When you left
it was like walking outside the day after a windstorm. The chill remained, but no remnant, no sign showed where you wandered. What you left behind offered the only reminder: scattered leaves, road signs askew, an overturned chair. When you were here your presence was a feeling, a touch against the skin, a stroke of hair, a breeze intangible to grasp, insubstantial as an unasked question. Not wishing to go off-kilter I altered my balance, strode forward against the current, brushed the hair away from my eyes. And now – the emptiness is non-empty. The absence recalls what was once there. The space between cause and effect was only a pause. I asked a woman for directions; she said, go down Forbes Avenue and turn left where the 7-Eleven used to be.
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Feb 20, 2015
Feb 20, 2015 at 11:30 AM UTC
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