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We had always been friends since childhood and we stayed just as close in highschool then one day that girl said that she loved me I guess at that time I felt happy We still teased each other like before we started to argue a lot more and she'd say I should be more manly I guess at that time I felt angry I realized too late things might soon end "maybe we should've just stayed as friends" she asked me, confirming my worst fear I guess at that time I shed tears My other friends came to hear the news and then offered their own points of view told me not to let it bother me I suppose that they felt sympathy but at that time I just felt empty Don't look at me with those empty eyes Don't think of me with your empty mind Don't flatter me with those empty words Please don't make feeling empty hurt
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Nov 3, 2017
Nov 3, 2017 at 8:45 AM UTC
Or maybe I'm just Full of ****
We had always been friends since childhood and we stayed just as close in highschool then one day that girl said that she loved me I guess at that time I felt happy We still teased each other like before we started to argue a lot more and she'd say I should be more manly I guess at that time I felt angry I realized too late things might soon end "maybe we should've just stayed as friends" she asked me, confirming my worst fear I guess at that time I shed tears My other friends came to hear the news and then offered their own points of view told me not to let it bother me I suppose that they felt sympathy but at that time I just felt empty Don't look at me with those empty eyes Don't think of me with your empty mind Don't flatter me with those empty words Please don't make feeling empty hurt
I wrote the last stanza first, and tried to fit everything else around it, but idk if it worked out too great.
NTR
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Nov 3, 2017
Nov 3, 2017 at 8:45 AM UTC
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