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i suppose, i must, i must, i must, go forth, go forth,go forth, into this brave day. but know this, truly, i crave, i crave, i crave, to stay, to stay, to stay, alone, here away from, the maddening crowd, at play, at play, at play, too loud, too loud, too loud, for my disconcordant mind. if i had my way, my way, my way, i would hide, away,away away, over there with books, with books, with books and uninterrupted solitude. but my lot is such, that a hermit, i am not! nor most days, want to be. but,today, today,today, the words penned above make up my mind's clockwork soliloquy. please let me hide my face, my face, my face. in this peaceful place, place, place, just til i catch my, breath, breath, breath.
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Apr 23, 2014
Apr 23, 2014 at 10:10 PM UTC
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i suppose, i must, i must, i must, go forth, go forth,go forth, into this brave day. but know this, truly, i crave, i crave, i crave, to stay, to stay, to stay, alone, here away from, the maddening crowd, at play, at play, at play, too loud, too loud, too loud, for my disconcordant mind. if i had my way, my way, my way, i would hide, away,away away, over there with books, with books, with books and uninterrupted solitude. but my lot is such, that a hermit, i am not! nor most days, want to be. but,today, today,today, the words penned above make up my mind's clockwork soliloquy. please let me hide my face, my face, my face. in this peaceful place, place, place, just til i catch my, breath, breath, breath.
napo wrimo day 23 prompt; i did n't feel comfortable(at all) with today's prompt ... to use a foriegn language poem  and write a verse utalizing the sounds the words made. (for me it was disrespectful to the beauty and intent of the writers words) so i give you this instead.. i have not written in this style before. so it did stretch the poetry in flight wings.
betterdays
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F/Australian
Apr 23, 2014
Apr 23, 2014 at 10:10 PM UTC
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