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It was all a reality Doris had come to accept (and Bernard too, to an extent). They had moved as if they were one entity for the majority of their life. Every thought would come in pairs; each footstep was echoed by the other, and every wine bottle was shared. They'd been wed for 50 years now, and with each anniversary, they found themselves becoming all the more soluble; mixed together like some kind of brilliant concoction: a solution to all of life’s problems.
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Jul 22, 2014
Jul 22, 2014 at 8:45 PM UTC
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It was all a reality Doris had come to accept (and Bernard too, to an extent). They had moved as if they were one entity for the majority of their life. Every thought would come in pairs; each footstep was echoed by the other, and every wine bottle was shared. They'd been wed for 50 years now, and with each anniversary, they found themselves becoming all the more soluble; mixed together like some kind of brilliant concoction: a solution to all of life’s problems.
Again, not an actual poem. I'm editing a story I wrote a year ago. Probably won't see the light of day, but I thought this part was sweet. It's about an old couple.
Edward-Coles
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26/M/English
Jul 22, 2014
Jul 22, 2014 at 8:45 PM UTC
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