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You think that forty years declare you old, Or fifty, sixty, so the numbers told. Yet age is not the number time has cast, Nor silver threads that through your hair have passed. It is not lines that round your eyes appear, Nor marks of time that slowly gather here. The truest age is counted deep within, In silent wars the heart has fought to win. It is the times you broke in hidden pain, Then rose again though none could see the strain. The nights you slept while grief consumed your chest, Yet spoke to none, denying heart its rest. For you had learned, in wisdom hard and grim, That few could hear and fewer understand. It is the hour you sadly came to see That those most loved could wound you bitterly. True age is shock that strikes the soul apart, One single blow that ages mind and heart. The moment when you waited for a word, A tender phrase of comfort never heard. The time you thought a friend would guard your side, Yet found your back abandoned in the tide. It is farewell—not only death’s decree, But living souls who vanish suddenly. The friend who changed within a fleeting day, The one you trusted, yet who walked away. True age is born from bitter disbelief, For such betrayal deepens every grief. It breaks the heart, yet something more profound: Your faith in life itself lies shattered, drowned. The moment when you learned with weary sight That kindness does not always lead to right. That honest hearts may sometimes suffer pain, And gifts of worth are offered oft in vain. True age is every trial you endured Before your heart was ready or assured. The roads you walked with trembling, fearful tread, Yet chose them still, for none were left instead. It is the people who your hopes betrayed— Not always cruel, but greater than they seemed you made. Each time you said, “I shall not feel this pain,” Yet felt it deep and spoke those words in vain. “I will move on,” you whispered to the past, And moved indeed—though changed at last. True age is quiet born of weary years, Not peace of mind, but rest from endless tears. You ceased to plead, to wait, to justify, And let your silent strength alone reply. You learned to laugh while silence filled your soul, A smile to bear the wounds beyond control. True age is wisdom calm and self-possessed, A thoughtful heart no longer rashly pressed. Not weak, but gentle—seeing through disguise, Aware of truth beneath life’s veiled lies. So you grew not because the years went by, But through the storms you faced beneath the sky. Through all you lost, endured, and overcame, And lonely roads where none beside you came. For some grow old through time’s relentless art, But some grow old through sorrow of the heart. Some grow through wisdom gained from trials severe, Some grow because the world was hard and drear. Yet one who walks through all and still can stand, Holds deeper strength no numbers can command. Not old in years—but great in soul and mind, Through pain and truth that life has left behind. And if these words within your spirit ring, Know this: one year did not such aging bring. Not two—but rather one full life you bore, Compressed within the trials you knew before.
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Mar 8
Mar 8, 2026 at 4:04 PM UTC
True Age
You think that forty years declare you old, Or fifty, sixty, so the numbers told. Yet age is not the number time has cast, Nor silver threads that through your hair have passed. It is not lines that round your eyes appear, Nor marks of time that slowly gather here. The truest age is counted deep within, In silent wars the heart has fought to win. It is the times you broke in hidden pain, Then rose again though none could see the strain. The nights you slept while grief consumed your chest, Yet spoke to none, denying heart its rest. For you had learned, in wisdom hard and grim, That few could hear and fewer understand. It is the hour you sadly came to see That those most loved could wound you bitterly. True age is shock that strikes the soul apart, One single blow that ages mind and heart. The moment when you waited for a word, A tender phrase of comfort never heard. The time you thought a friend would guard your side, Yet found your back abandoned in the tide. It is farewell—not only death’s decree, But living souls who vanish suddenly. The friend who changed within a fleeting day, The one you trusted, yet who walked away. True age is born from bitter disbelief, For such betrayal deepens every grief. It breaks the heart, yet something more profound: Your faith in life itself lies shattered, drowned. The moment when you learned with weary sight That kindness does not always lead to right. That honest hearts may sometimes suffer pain, And gifts of worth are offered oft in vain. True age is every trial you endured Before your heart was ready or assured. The roads you walked with trembling, fearful tread, Yet chose them still, for none were left instead. It is the people who your hopes betrayed— Not always cruel, but greater than they seemed you made. Each time you said, “I shall not feel this pain,” Yet felt it deep and spoke those words in vain. “I will move on,” you whispered to the past, And moved indeed—though changed at last. True age is quiet born of weary years, Not peace of mind, but rest from endless tears. You ceased to plead, to wait, to justify, And let your silent strength alone reply. You learned to laugh while silence filled your soul, A smile to bear the wounds beyond control. True age is wisdom calm and self-possessed, A thoughtful heart no longer rashly pressed. Not weak, but gentle—seeing through disguise, Aware of truth beneath life’s veiled lies. So you grew not because the years went by, But through the storms you faced beneath the sky. Through all you lost, endured, and overcame, And lonely roads where none beside you came. For some grow old through time’s relentless art, But some grow old through sorrow of the heart. Some grow through wisdom gained from trials severe, Some grow because the world was hard and drear. Yet one who walks through all and still can stand, Holds deeper strength no numbers can command. Not old in years—but great in soul and mind, Through pain and truth that life has left behind. And if these words within your spirit ring, Know this: one year did not such aging bring. Not two—but rather one full life you bore, Compressed within the trials you knew before.
walid-abdallah
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Mar 8
Mar 8, 2026 at 4:04 PM UTC
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