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I still owe you proof Of why you are amazing But I didn’t want to sound too stupid Or too crazy Or utter cliché things That wouldn’t cause you to move Here is why you’re amazing Because you saved a boy’s life Both inside and out You loved this demon When it didn’t deserve love You mended its scars As soon as they were cut Because of you A scared little boy’s shell Wasn’t shattered apart, Just slowly chipped Till the rest fell apart You brought a smile To a lonely nerd You took his hand When he was used to air You lay on his shoulder And made him stiffen like Medusa’s stare And gave him a journal That he filled with his despair You are an angel Because you love You love Mom You love Dad You love my siblings And you love nature You caused me to grow And love those I didn’t really know Loulou Will Aunt Ginger Jesus, God You are outstanding Because you care About friends And strangers You sacrifice yourself For others to be happy You put yourself towards the bottom So others can feel the top You are amazing Because you made a loner loser Keep a jar Of bubble soap To blow away is pain And hope to share with his princess one day You’ve made a child Who hasn’t cried in years Bawl at the thought That you wouldn’t be near Or that he caused our tears You’ve caused an arrogant gent To stop and think On whether it was time to grow up Or lose his love To stop and stare At the road ahead And the consequences of the path he led You have known this “knight” Who wears a tattered worn Gym school uniform And gave him hope That he wouldn’t grow old alone You met a child In 2009 Whom you’ve help mold Almost a third of his life Into a man Who he is proud of today I know this is long And it’s time for bed But I couldn’t go another day Without telling you the way On which you have changed forever The heart and mind Of my person and my life You are gorgeous You are intelligent You are stunning But most of all What I love over all Is the fact that I have The privilege to state the fact That I love you And that you are Absolutely Perfectly Hands down The most Amazing person That has ever Entered my life
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Apr 25, 2013
Apr 25, 2013 at 10:55 PM UTC
Why She's Amazing
I still owe you proof Of why you are amazing But I didn’t want to sound too stupid Or too crazy Or utter cliché things That wouldn’t cause you to move Here is why you’re amazing Because you saved a boy’s life Both inside and out You loved this demon When it didn’t deserve love You mended its scars As soon as they were cut Because of you A scared little boy’s shell Wasn’t shattered apart, Just slowly chipped Till the rest fell apart You brought a smile To a lonely nerd You took his hand When he was used to air You lay on his shoulder And made him stiffen like Medusa’s stare And gave him a journal That he filled with his despair You are an angel Because you love You love Mom You love Dad You love my siblings And you love nature You caused me to grow And love those I didn’t really know Loulou Will Aunt Ginger Jesus, God You are outstanding Because you care About friends And strangers You sacrifice yourself For others to be happy You put yourself towards the bottom So others can feel the top You are amazing Because you made a loner loser Keep a jar Of bubble soap To blow away is pain And hope to share with his princess one day You’ve made a child Who hasn’t cried in years Bawl at the thought That you wouldn’t be near Or that he caused our tears You’ve caused an arrogant gent To stop and think On whether it was time to grow up Or lose his love To stop and stare At the road ahead And the consequences of the path he led You have known this “knight” Who wears a tattered worn Gym school uniform And gave him hope That he wouldn’t grow old alone You met a child In 2009 Whom you’ve help mold Almost a third of his life Into a man Who he is proud of today I know this is long And it’s time for bed But I couldn’t go another day Without telling you the way On which you have changed forever The heart and mind Of my person and my life You are gorgeous You are intelligent You are stunning But most of all What I love over all Is the fact that I have The privilege to state the fact That I love you And that you are Absolutely Perfectly Hands down The most Amazing person That has ever Entered my life
Edrazzar
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Apr 25, 2013
Apr 25, 2013 at 10:55 PM UTC
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