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I could see him standing beneath the bridge, dressed in blue and navy cotton and denim, his beard was long, longer than your train the train you had as a kid, his beard huffed and puffed telling the story of growing old his eyes were clouds floating on his face and if he was angry only his nose would know, bent and flat pushed up farther on the right hung down lower on the left, I only assume he had lips and teeth, only his beard moved but he never spoke beards don't speak, he wasn't wearing shoes, it was cold outside, snowmen would melt, but it was still cold, It had just rained I could see the puddles but I couldn't see the sun, This man saw nothing he just stood there, I just walked by. I could see him thinking all the thoughts we try to forget, his face was wrinkled, furrowed brows make the deepest lines, a soggy man, he ate enough or drank enough i guessed, because he was warm enough, a thinking man, what better place to think than under a bridge, I'll call him the troll, I'll paint paintings and write with chalk I'll make a memorial for a man who's only a memory, I saw him, I can't forget, This man will never die, he'll last as long as the chalk on the ground, keep thinking for us troll thinking keeps the boy insane, keep saving us troll we can't do it we keep forgetting, keep standing troll cause we keep falling down, be my savior troll, and I'll keep walking, just don't steal my ****
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Dec 4, 2010
Dec 4, 2010 at 2:59 PM UTC
troll
I could see him standing beneath the bridge, dressed in blue and navy cotton and denim, his beard was long, longer than your train the train you had as a kid, his beard huffed and puffed telling the story of growing old his eyes were clouds floating on his face and if he was angry only his nose would know, bent and flat pushed up farther on the right hung down lower on the left, I only assume he had lips and teeth, only his beard moved but he never spoke beards don't speak, he wasn't wearing shoes, it was cold outside, snowmen would melt, but it was still cold, It had just rained I could see the puddles but I couldn't see the sun, This man saw nothing he just stood there, I just walked by. I could see him thinking all the thoughts we try to forget, his face was wrinkled, furrowed brows make the deepest lines, a soggy man, he ate enough or drank enough i guessed, because he was warm enough, a thinking man, what better place to think than under a bridge, I'll call him the troll, I'll paint paintings and write with chalk I'll make a memorial for a man who's only a memory, I saw him, I can't forget, This man will never die, he'll last as long as the chalk on the ground, keep thinking for us troll thinking keeps the boy insane, keep saving us troll we can't do it we keep forgetting, keep standing troll cause we keep falling down, be my savior troll, and I'll keep walking, just don't steal my ****
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Dec 4, 2010
Dec 4, 2010 at 2:59 PM UTC
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