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*Freezing cold, a  strange night of rain and thunder, it got registred deep in his consciousness, as a squiggling liquid presence; an abstract painting, taken in, with layers of meaning, a deluge, the result of injustices heaped against the female principle. The rain lashed out, in the flashes of lightning in between, through the window sills when the curtains where swept aside by a subversive wind, painful face of a frightened girl was visible, at the window of a highrise building, shameful secrets kept concealed peeped out yelling out "HELP"in the shocking words of silence. That night was difficult for an exile from life like him to endure, subconscious echoed terror filled cries; sewer water flowed, towards oblivion, carrying embryos, not fully formed from terminated pregnancies, he heared tree toads speaking in strange tongues, like jilted women seeking vengeance, coyotes hunting in packs with blood thirst howled in delight. In his nightmare, blood dripped from wet trees, "who will rescue our bloodied orphaned planet?" his heart with a collective guilt , beyond words wailed. From denuded mountain slopes, muddy red water copiously gushed  downhill, nature's menstrual flow out of cycle, devastated hillsides cleaving gashes, like scorned woman's fury baring long sharp  fangs- landslides opened gaping wounds. Liquid's rule took over the space of night, lying awake on his bed, he became conscious of the burden of women, who moved around with invisible bridles pretending free, nervously smiling. Swimming in the amniotic fluid of the past he is forced to recount the past sins, nature and women have endured and ask for forgiveness seeking salvation.*
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Nov 21, 2013
Nov 21, 2013 at 2:46 PM UTC
Sin and salvation
*Freezing cold, a  strange night of rain and thunder, it got registred deep in his consciousness, as a squiggling liquid presence; an abstract painting, taken in, with layers of meaning, a deluge, the result of injustices heaped against the female principle. The rain lashed out, in the flashes of lightning in between, through the window sills when the curtains where swept aside by a subversive wind, painful face of a frightened girl was visible, at the window of a highrise building, shameful secrets kept concealed peeped out yelling out "HELP"in the shocking words of silence. That night was difficult for an exile from life like him to endure, subconscious echoed terror filled cries; sewer water flowed, towards oblivion, carrying embryos, not fully formed from terminated pregnancies, he heared tree toads speaking in strange tongues, like jilted women seeking vengeance, coyotes hunting in packs with blood thirst howled in delight. In his nightmare, blood dripped from wet trees, "who will rescue our bloodied orphaned planet?" his heart with a collective guilt , beyond words wailed. From denuded mountain slopes, muddy red water copiously gushed  downhill, nature's menstrual flow out of cycle, devastated hillsides cleaving gashes, like scorned woman's fury baring long sharp  fangs- landslides opened gaping wounds. Liquid's rule took over the space of night, lying awake on his bed, he became conscious of the burden of women, who moved around with invisible bridles pretending free, nervously smiling. Swimming in the amniotic fluid of the past he is forced to recount the past sins, nature and women have endured and ask for forgiveness seeking salvation.*
The female divine has always been an intrinsic part of indian tradition.Shakti and Shiva the female and male are revered as parts of being and the cosmic power.
k-balachandran
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Nov 21, 2013
Nov 21, 2013 at 2:46 PM UTC
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