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On a cool damp night the patter of the port subsided drips of the cold rain echo a captain ripe with whiskey breaks the silence of the harbor feeling his way back to the flat on high street navigating his feet on each stone he muttered to himself “left, right and then right again” ending at a stoop he found the *** within three “click” the humble door opened entering the dwelling ready for the weeks pummel he swung his fists at the inhabitants especially the women, the wife this night was routine the smell of whiskey, puke and **** is familiar but, tonight the mist in the air was different his blood boiled with fermented spirits his eyes gazed an emptiness of black with a quick hand reaching for a sparkle of steel he firmed his grip and pulled from the block it made a “ting” sound as it cut the air meeting gently with mothers throat with rage, his eyes stabbed with intention holding the cold steel to freckled skin his remarks filled her eyes with fear and I in the corner, watching, listening, feeling and rocking yes that was you, as a sea captain and I was there
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Apr 11, 2012
Apr 11, 2012 at 10:04 PM UTC
My father as a sea captain
On a cool damp night the patter of the port subsided drips of the cold rain echo a captain ripe with whiskey breaks the silence of the harbor feeling his way back to the flat on high street navigating his feet on each stone he muttered to himself “left, right and then right again” ending at a stoop he found the *** within three “click” the humble door opened entering the dwelling ready for the weeks pummel he swung his fists at the inhabitants especially the women, the wife this night was routine the smell of whiskey, puke and **** is familiar but, tonight the mist in the air was different his blood boiled with fermented spirits his eyes gazed an emptiness of black with a quick hand reaching for a sparkle of steel he firmed his grip and pulled from the block it made a “ting” sound as it cut the air meeting gently with mothers throat with rage, his eyes stabbed with intention holding the cold steel to freckled skin his remarks filled her eyes with fear and I in the corner, watching, listening, feeling and rocking yes that was you, as a sea captain and I was there
jason-drury
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Apr 11, 2012
Apr 11, 2012 at 10:04 PM UTC
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