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i have lived more years than you and that will never change if you want to take my path i will let you. but, never make the mistakes i made. the world is harsh and something always has to give but, it is okay for i love what i do. make sure you give less make sure your love never fades. you are the only one i am willing to lose to but rest assured i will never go easy because, i know your worth and you might be the only person on earth who is worth more than me.
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Aug 25, 2023
Aug 25, 2023 at 10:35 AM UTC
(this is what it means, to be brothers)
i have lived more years than you and that will never change if you want to take my path i will let you. but, never make the mistakes i made. the world is harsh and something always has to give but, it is okay for i love what i do. make sure you give less make sure your love never fades. you are the only one i am willing to lose to but rest assured i will never go easy because, i know your worth and you might be the only person on earth who is worth more than me.
title says brothers but this is meant to be gender neutral. inspired by 1. being an eldest sibling 2. watching siblings in motorsports. it's exactly 100 words long which i'm quite proud of.
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Aug 25, 2023
Aug 25, 2023 at 10:35 AM UTC
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