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Thank you mum for our precious times that were filled with so much fun  Our wonderful family holidays  Starting when we were very young Waipatiki beach such a beautiful place  With the sun and the sea breeze on our face Mum and Aunty in a caravan  us kids would pitch our tents Chuck on our togs, grab a towel off to the beach we went  Campsite was in a paddock  Adjacent to the beach  We had camp beds  so mattresses were off the ground So for us the evening chill did not reach Sometimes a friend was able to come  this would really add to the fun   Such a special place this was where the river meets the ocean Late at night as we lay in our tents we'd listen to the waves motion Time spent at the beach   searching for sea crustaceans with mum and aunty on our seaside family vacations We'd swim in the River  swim in the Sea Such wonderful memories these are for me
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May 22, 2018
May 22, 2018 at 10:51 AM UTC
Thank You Mum
Thank you mum for our precious times that were filled with so much fun  Our wonderful family holidays  Starting when we were very young Waipatiki beach such a beautiful place  With the sun and the sea breeze on our face Mum and Aunty in a caravan  us kids would pitch our tents Chuck on our togs, grab a towel off to the beach we went  Campsite was in a paddock  Adjacent to the beach  We had camp beds  so mattresses were off the ground So for us the evening chill did not reach Sometimes a friend was able to come  this would really add to the fun   Such a special place this was where the river meets the ocean Late at night as we lay in our tents we'd listen to the waves motion Time spent at the beach   searching for sea crustaceans with mum and aunty on our seaside family vacations We'd swim in the River  swim in the Sea Such wonderful memories these are for me
Had to rewrite. Wonderful holidays with mum, Aunty Rose our cousins my siblings and sometimes a friend. Fabulous memories x
debbie-brindley
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51/F/Perth, Australia
May 22, 2018
May 22, 2018 at 10:51 AM UTC
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