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Darkness Covering the land Creeps in me I feel it My heart Darkness As I reject All the good Love Joy Happiness It is easier I reason To not care To be safe No pain From loss Darkness Pushed back from me My heart As the sun rises I see the wasteland I created within me And I weep At what I made Empty fields lay fallow Trees, skeletal and dry No life anywhere Nothing at all Darkness made this In me My heart My choice Was I right? WAS I RIGHT? No love No pain no pain... only darkness...
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May 5, 2015
May 5, 2015 at 11:00 PM UTC
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Darkness Covering the land Creeps in me I feel it My heart Darkness As I reject All the good Love Joy Happiness It is easier I reason To not care To be safe No pain From loss Darkness Pushed back from me My heart As the sun rises I see the wasteland I created within me And I weep At what I made Empty fields lay fallow Trees, skeletal and dry No life anywhere Nothing at all Darkness made this In me My heart My choice Was I right? WAS I RIGHT? No love No pain no pain... only darkness...
First draft. Seems pretty good, tho. But needs punching up. Input and criticism is appreciated.
jake-hicks
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May 5, 2015
May 5, 2015 at 11:00 PM UTC
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