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Before the hurricane, in my youngest years things were extremely different My outlook on Louisiana was a place of water and happiness I was six years old, and boating was what I did for fun every single day Boating was what basketball is to me today, a treasure, an outlet The bayous were alive, the marshes were green, and the trees fruitful You could smell the salty mud, (which smells very different from a beach) Our white propeller boat sped to the lake, and lake mist sprayed our faces Fishermen and crabbers littered the banks, pulling in flailing lively catches We ate the fruits of their labor at the Cajun restaurant on the bayou, inwards This was no commercial place, but only the locals had ever been It was rough, light blue paint peeling, men with grey beards laughing And the smell of fresh fried catfish had taken over the place, Perhaps the most unique thing about it was the way to get to it, strictly by boat My childhood is colorfully painted with these memories, however, The real life experiences have been swept away in the muddy currents The restaurant was knocked off its stilts and demolished, The trees now branchless, dead, and the marshes are hues of yellow and brown No longer is the water lively, but still, no longer is it safe to dive to the bottom For fear of remains of houses, boats, glass puncturing our bodies I consider myself lucky to get to experience that everyday, the bayou was my backyard That was the Louisiana that is on postcards, not the usual experience of suburbs That was the Louisiana I used to know, the Louisiana that is no more in my life
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Mar 3, 2015
Mar 3, 2015 at 12:28 PM UTC
Louisiana
Before the hurricane, in my youngest years things were extremely different My outlook on Louisiana was a place of water and happiness I was six years old, and boating was what I did for fun every single day Boating was what basketball is to me today, a treasure, an outlet The bayous were alive, the marshes were green, and the trees fruitful You could smell the salty mud, (which smells very different from a beach) Our white propeller boat sped to the lake, and lake mist sprayed our faces Fishermen and crabbers littered the banks, pulling in flailing lively catches We ate the fruits of their labor at the Cajun restaurant on the bayou, inwards This was no commercial place, but only the locals had ever been It was rough, light blue paint peeling, men with grey beards laughing And the smell of fresh fried catfish had taken over the place, Perhaps the most unique thing about it was the way to get to it, strictly by boat My childhood is colorfully painted with these memories, however, The real life experiences have been swept away in the muddy currents The restaurant was knocked off its stilts and demolished, The trees now branchless, dead, and the marshes are hues of yellow and brown No longer is the water lively, but still, no longer is it safe to dive to the bottom For fear of remains of houses, boats, glass puncturing our bodies I consider myself lucky to get to experience that everyday, the bayou was my backyard That was the Louisiana that is on postcards, not the usual experience of suburbs That was the Louisiana I used to know, the Louisiana that is no more in my life
RJB
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Mar 3, 2015
Mar 3, 2015 at 12:28 PM UTC
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