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For the Haters of Inception, For the Ladies of Gainesville (3 Notions)

I.      I had once thought and so there for told you

that action is more important

than thought

So here I am writing my heart

 

II.    You say you like

My words

I say that everything I want

I turn into phantoms

 

At days end for you, I am striving to be a rock, one that you

Might hold onto in rough waters

and yet,

I am floating

in my own great, salty sea

 

III. I'll dream that we take

a long weekend in the city

it's raining

and it seems as though

the whole East Side

May float away

We order room service

and we intertwine

and it feels like the bond of

root in earth

of tide to beach

as atom to atom

as eve to adam

and we fall asleep

Things are quiet

You no longer bare that weight

on your narrow shoulders

My passed has passed

We fall in love and into sleep

and we do not

sleep to dream

any longer

We are living one

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craig-dotti
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Published
Aug 13, 2010
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