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Is it best to lie in the snow And let a scream out to the world? To speak of ideas that have swirled, Have fallen to the ground as slow? Waiting for the damp heavy weight That likes to linger on my chest To take the fingers it has pressed And lift them from my weak breastplate. O, how I wish the weight was gone, To drift away as the clouds do. Will the weight let me call out to The mountains holding up the dawn? I could stand to learn a few things From how the snowflakes like to fall. Melting so exquisite and small, Their bitter cold into nothing.
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Dec 9, 2020
Dec 9, 2020 at 12:51 AM UTC
Snowy Mountain
Is it best to lie in the snow And let a scream out to the world? To speak of ideas that have swirled, Have fallen to the ground as slow? Waiting for the damp heavy weight That likes to linger on my chest To take the fingers it has pressed And lift them from my weak breastplate. O, how I wish the weight was gone, To drift away as the clouds do. Will the weight let me call out to The mountains holding up the dawn? I could stand to learn a few things From how the snowflakes like to fall. Melting so exquisite and small, Their bitter cold into nothing.
i wrote this for creative writing and kind of like it, and yes it’s supposed to be formal
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118/Non-binary/River Styx
Dec 9, 2020
Dec 9, 2020 at 12:51 AM UTC
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