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Sitting across my eyes study you; a painter taking in his model, to mind's portal: you sit hunched over the dining table top, a work of art "The girl in a hurry taking few quick bites"                                I am a picture                                yet to be attempted                               "The man in agony"                                would have  just dark hues, you left in a huff to catch the inter-city train, I work at night, so went to lay down,                                  When my eyes drooped                                  I leaned against  you,                                  your scent has such                                  soporific touch                                  that bring longings                                  soon to the fore. And in my sleep I remember, you'll be lying in my bed, with in your lonely mind all through commuting, rocked by the train.
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Oct 25, 2012
Oct 25, 2012 at 7:47 AM UTC
Hollow
Sitting across my eyes study you; a painter taking in his model, to mind's portal: you sit hunched over the dining table top, a work of art "The girl in a hurry taking few quick bites"                                I am a picture                                yet to be attempted                               "The man in agony"                                would have  just dark hues, you left in a huff to catch the inter-city train, I work at night, so went to lay down,                                  When my eyes drooped                                  I leaned against  you,                                  your scent has such                                  soporific touch                                  that bring longings                                  soon to the fore. And in my sleep I remember, you'll be lying in my bed, with in your lonely mind all through commuting, rocked by the train.
k-balachandran
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Oct 25, 2012
Oct 25, 2012 at 7:47 AM UTC
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