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Take all that I own The children of my thoughts Severed from completion Haunt me with your zombie right You, walking dead, making Hellish nightmare of my pride Have the arms that bear my burden And the ligaments that establish your being And dial the number that numbs me mad I have brought you upon myself, shackle  of decaying flesh And to sate my blood-lust I ill take this hurt mass And rip it from my flesh In rose petal patterns I will remove the excess limbs Holding onto the past And cleaver my ambitions for everything left And in the mass of my meat and muscle And the weight of every drop of blood I've bled I will form a Lazarus start Through the halls of beautiful dismemberment Through the multitude of converging paths I forge a new way I forge my own way (It is a strange night that the wind does not make a sound)
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Sep 28, 2012
Sep 28, 2012 at 1:58 PM UTC
Frustration In the Key of Self Dismemberment
Take all that I own The children of my thoughts Severed from completion Haunt me with your zombie right You, walking dead, making Hellish nightmare of my pride Have the arms that bear my burden And the ligaments that establish your being And dial the number that numbs me mad I have brought you upon myself, shackle  of decaying flesh And to sate my blood-lust I ill take this hurt mass And rip it from my flesh In rose petal patterns I will remove the excess limbs Holding onto the past And cleaver my ambitions for everything left And in the mass of my meat and muscle And the weight of every drop of blood I've bled I will form a Lazarus start Through the halls of beautiful dismemberment Through the multitude of converging paths I forge a new way I forge my own way (It is a strange night that the wind does not make a sound)
I feel like the idea is solid, but the amount I convey is limited to the style of my writing and not displayed in full. Any ideas on how to convey things a little better?
cary-fosback
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Sep 28, 2012
Sep 28, 2012 at 1:58 PM UTC
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