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A half completed hotel comes down around a hollow bastion of silence and peace. How rare silence is; how preciously finite like all the good things. Like wine and cherries and orchids and any combination of the three. My father and I used to climb mountains to experience a silent so absolute that you had to hold your breath because it was making too much noise. A silence so complete that you can hear the trees grow. But the hotel is crashing down around my ears so clamorous and horrid leaving me alone freezing in the cold rubble and ruins surrounding me listening to the cars pass by on the interstate. How quickly stained glass breaks.
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Apr 16, 2011
Apr 16, 2011 at 11:49 AM UTC
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A half completed hotel comes down around a hollow bastion of silence and peace. How rare silence is; how preciously finite like all the good things. Like wine and cherries and orchids and any combination of the three. My father and I used to climb mountains to experience a silent so absolute that you had to hold your breath because it was making too much noise. A silence so complete that you can hear the trees grow. But the hotel is crashing down around my ears so clamorous and horrid leaving me alone freezing in the cold rubble and ruins surrounding me listening to the cars pass by on the interstate. How quickly stained glass breaks.
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Apr 16, 2011
Apr 16, 2011 at 11:49 AM UTC
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