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Pausing, I remember the white snow capped Sighs departing from your spun out white capped Lips; you lifted your neck and with it your head Tilted, and looked for me.  It was then that I died a little, for I saw you in reality, a sorry State of affairs...clinging to life itself Dearly longing for a break in this broken Passageway of your life.   How might we endorse the meaning of 'Your Life'....together; could we walk...you on wheels... Me pushing with all my might until the curtain Falls and snuffs your life upwards towards heaven And home, your beat no longer in time with mine....as I am left looking into the filmy clouds Of your departure, hanging on your last words... "Life's been a blast...from start to finish", and my Finish has arrived before yours...that's all!!! As simple as that...and you were gone But life is not so simple!!!....not now, not here Not...anywhere....
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Nov 9, 2012
Nov 9, 2012 at 7:53 AM UTC
Living with Life
Pausing, I remember the white snow capped Sighs departing from your spun out white capped Lips; you lifted your neck and with it your head Tilted, and looked for me.  It was then that I died a little, for I saw you in reality, a sorry State of affairs...clinging to life itself Dearly longing for a break in this broken Passageway of your life.   How might we endorse the meaning of 'Your Life'....together; could we walk...you on wheels... Me pushing with all my might until the curtain Falls and snuffs your life upwards towards heaven And home, your beat no longer in time with mine....as I am left looking into the filmy clouds Of your departure, hanging on your last words... "Life's been a blast...from start to finish", and my Finish has arrived before yours...that's all!!! As simple as that...and you were gone But life is not so simple!!!....not now, not here Not...anywhere....
laura-susan-smith
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Nov 9, 2012
Nov 9, 2012 at 7:53 AM UTC
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