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The paltering sounds of acid rain, burning as they reach the concrete ground. I know it was painful - I couldn't help you. An endless whisper haunts your mind, midst in the acid rain - where I'll cover you from the burning rain. You let the rain drip down your beautiful heart and scar you, regretful of your past. Although, I loved you, so I can't just watch and let time pass. An embrace made us forget the iron taste of blood, or my wounds smeared in mud. As a haunting whisper will forever remain in the past, I'll love you with all I have, despite you no longer being my other half.
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Nov 26, 2024
Nov 26, 2024 at 2:15 PM UTC
"Raining Regrets."
The paltering sounds of acid rain, burning as they reach the concrete ground. I know it was painful - I couldn't help you. An endless whisper haunts your mind, midst in the acid rain - where I'll cover you from the burning rain. You let the rain drip down your beautiful heart and scar you, regretful of your past. Although, I loved you, so I can't just watch and let time pass. An embrace made us forget the iron taste of blood, or my wounds smeared in mud. As a haunting whisper will forever remain in the past, I'll love you with all I have, despite you no longer being my other half.
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16/M/Canada
Nov 26, 2024
Nov 26, 2024 at 2:15 PM UTC
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