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You have degraded, I was told I hadn't a chance to stop my thinking on why it sounded odd because I write like imaginary objects I coloured with mud and nobody understands my writing no one wanted to read my rhymes so I tried my best to settle to simplify my lines now I am negated for degrading shouldn't I be given a bit just a little bit of compassion for the small me to believe I only tried to make people to emphathize my pain
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Feb 5, 2019
Feb 5, 2019 at 8:35 PM UTC
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You have degraded, I was told I hadn't a chance to stop my thinking on why it sounded odd because I write like imaginary objects I coloured with mud and nobody understands my writing no one wanted to read my rhymes so I tried my best to settle to simplify my lines now I am negated for degrading shouldn't I be given a bit just a little bit of compassion for the small me to believe I only tried to make people to emphathize my pain
I know it is not enough poetic. I know it is not enough.. but it is there.
Tint_Grin
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Feb 5, 2019
Feb 5, 2019 at 8:35 PM UTC
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