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Several miles beyond, the dark mountain looms threateningly - mirroring my mood as we both brood coldly. Snow clouds hold grip of its peaks and melt in an icy drizzle to the umber, wind-swept valley below. Inside this dank motel room with its peeling walls, my addiction is both hidden and enhanced. The room's grimy window is closed to the world by a threadbare curtain which hangs askew, sealing me inside my drunken cocoon. I can now lift bottles to my mouth with abandon, gratefully lacking the contempt of others. A tinny television mutters a string of profanities from a corner, and a faucet drips incessantly into the filthy sink. It all seems to echo into what I have evolved. I have become as this dead fly, scraping back and forth along the window sill,   manipulated by currents of stale air. ___
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Sep 14, 2011
Sep 14, 2011 at 1:25 PM UTC
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Several miles beyond, the dark mountain looms threateningly - mirroring my mood as we both brood coldly. Snow clouds hold grip of its peaks and melt in an icy drizzle to the umber, wind-swept valley below. Inside this dank motel room with its peeling walls, my addiction is both hidden and enhanced. The room's grimy window is closed to the world by a threadbare curtain which hangs askew, sealing me inside my drunken cocoon. I can now lift bottles to my mouth with abandon, gratefully lacking the contempt of others. A tinny television mutters a string of profanities from a corner, and a faucet drips incessantly into the filthy sink. It all seems to echo into what I have evolved. I have become as this dead fly, scraping back and forth along the window sill,   manipulated by currents of stale air. ___
warren-gossett
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Sep 14, 2011
Sep 14, 2011 at 1:25 PM UTC
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