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𝄞:♫⋆。♪₊˚♬゚.  °. ⋆༺  ☾  𖤓  ༻  ⋆.   °  𝄞:♫⋆。♪₊˚♬゚. Peacock feathers perfection. A baby panther yawning yawning, sleek and black, a swan leaning back stretching pristine snowy wings. Petrichor, crisp musk, the feelings we bring floating river feathers, mother’s ozone after rain, all around hitting soft down. The reddest of roses held to the sky. The clearest of tears we have yet to cry. A silvery plate of oily green olives throwing back the sun, of which they are ,   one. ( of which we all are) so hard, becoming one with nothing again in each passing breath. Energy expended. A thought, by moments.... in emotions extended. A child's  coffin The care of casket sheen — soft silken interiors  now  overflowing with the wet, inky blackness of squirming, over-lit salamanders. Writhing Erupting. Effluviant. Rubbery little salamanders. Hitting the over polished marble floor falling yearning for freedom    and little more. Everywhere.  So black and shiny . Overflowing , spilling out they wander and we wonder what is it all about. all  this cascading and spilling out.     Bouncing,        smacking. Nature. The nature Of art and beauty. Understanding,            the great misunderstanding right before our eyes. Right. before.         Our eyes. Rite before our eyes. Eyes,      another’s            . What we truly long to see. The clarity of symbols   built over   centuries and lost   in a single fire/trend.
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Feb 6, 2025
Feb 6, 2025 at 12:23 PM UTC
symbols/Words and the Justice Done
𝄞:♫⋆。♪₊˚♬゚.  °. ⋆༺  ☾  𖤓  ༻  ⋆.   °  𝄞:♫⋆。♪₊˚♬゚. Peacock feathers perfection. A baby panther yawning yawning, sleek and black, a swan leaning back stretching pristine snowy wings. Petrichor, crisp musk, the feelings we bring floating river feathers, mother’s ozone after rain, all around hitting soft down. The reddest of roses held to the sky. The clearest of tears we have yet to cry. A silvery plate of oily green olives throwing back the sun, of which they are ,   one. ( of which we all are) so hard, becoming one with nothing again in each passing breath. Energy expended. A thought, by moments.... in emotions extended. A child's  coffin The care of casket sheen — soft silken interiors  now  overflowing with the wet, inky blackness of squirming, over-lit salamanders. Writhing Erupting. Effluviant. Rubbery little salamanders. Hitting the over polished marble floor falling yearning for freedom    and little more. Everywhere.  So black and shiny . Overflowing , spilling out they wander and we wonder what is it all about. all  this cascading and spilling out.     Bouncing,        smacking. Nature. The nature Of art and beauty. Understanding,            the great misunderstanding right before our eyes. Right. before.         Our eyes. Rite before our eyes. Eyes,      another’s            . What we truly long to see. The clarity of symbols   built over   centuries and lost   in a single fire/trend.
Symbols have no power unless we agree and teach their meaning. that’s exactly the kicker. In Europe, salamanders were practically mythological. Medieval alchemists thought they were born of fire itself — creatures that could live inside flames without burning. In Japan, giant salamanders are tied to rivers and storms, even seen as protectors or omens. Indigenous cultures in the Americas saw them as water spirits, messengers between worlds. But here in the U.S.? They get flattened into “slimy lizards,” if they’re noticed at all. The fire-beast, the river-god, the omen — all gone. That’s the tragedy of symbols: without a culture to carry them, they collapse into nothing but biology. That’s why your salamanders erupting from the casket hit so strangely hard — you’ve resurrected that lost weight, even if most of your readers don’t consciously know it. They feel something uncanny because the creature used to mean more, and some buried part of us still recognizes it.
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Feb 6, 2025
Feb 6, 2025 at 12:23 PM UTC
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