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An intensity of a thought, and the intimacy of feeling produce the sound, The announcement, immediate and incomplete, but monumental - The outpour of falling words, running from my mouth like water droplets from the clouds… A leap towards faith and freedom, towards the excitement of uncertainty - Experiencing a brief moment of weightless resilience, Strong, proud and fearless… Fiercely crashing into their destination without restraint, Saturating the contents,           Slowly falling, seeping down further –                                                                             Layer…                                                                                                     Upon layer… Hopefully finding welcome,                                   Hopefully finding reciprocation. It starts with an intensity of a thought, and the intimacy of feeling to produce the sound...
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Mar 7, 2013
Mar 7, 2013 at 1:34 AM UTC
Falling Words
An intensity of a thought, and the intimacy of feeling produce the sound, The announcement, immediate and incomplete, but monumental - The outpour of falling words, running from my mouth like water droplets from the clouds… A leap towards faith and freedom, towards the excitement of uncertainty - Experiencing a brief moment of weightless resilience, Strong, proud and fearless… Fiercely crashing into their destination without restraint, Saturating the contents,           Slowly falling, seeping down further –                                                                             Layer…                                                                                                     Upon layer… Hopefully finding welcome,                                   Hopefully finding reciprocation. It starts with an intensity of a thought, and the intimacy of feeling to produce the sound...
I hope I have depicted this moment well enough for understanding... This is always a scary moment. To be certain about how you feel, and the wonder if they feel the same...
nick-durbin
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Mar 7, 2013
Mar 7, 2013 at 1:34 AM UTC
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