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Hue

The wind is getting faster, warmer

And the trees have gone green overnight

Watch the shrinking shadows as the clouds release sunlight

Hear the breathless chatter of a countdown summer

 

My brothers will throw paper onto orange flame

That crackles beneath laughter of the best kind

My sisters will cry in a Hollywood sigh

That things will never be the same

 

Among answers and exits that I never cared to find

The days are melting through red brick shields

Hear the big band blare through snow cone fields

Watch my father pack his bags, watch my mother lose her mind

 

A common thread pulls me far from home

My blue walls dissolve into boxes, then curious loss

Left with thoughts of the miles and borders to cross

To larger trees and longer roads to roam

 

Will my brothers burn the nights away as they do now?

Will my sisters be braver and sharper somehow?

Will the blinding white tapestry unravel to offer another thread

Or will the warm wind and shadows be this time full of dread?

 

The wind is growing harsh and cool

And the trees have turned black without a fight

Watch the staggering sky as the shadow overtakes the light

Hear the wistful worries of a countdown fool

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Written by
taylor-martin
American
Published
Apr 17, 2013
Lines·Words
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Notes

Uh? I just wrote this during my lunch break and I don't even know what to say about it. It's kind of a mess, but I like it at present.

Not a fan of the title. I never like the titles I come up with.

Anyway. It's a going-to-college poem like any other, and again I feel like there are a lot of parts that won't make sense outside of my own head, but hopefully you enjoyed it all the same.

Also just a tidbit regarding my last poem about the guy I didn't talk to? I did it again with a different guy who was standing right by the main doors of school with an unplugged electric guitar playing Green Day's Welcome to Paradise. I was on my way out and I recognized the song and a part of me wanted to stop and be like "hey, that's a good song, my name is Taylor," BUT FOR SOME REASON I ALWAYS IGNORE THAT PART OF MY BRAIN AND JUST KEEP WALKING AND I'M SICK OF IT AND I HATE ME.

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