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From Pradip: ”The place you occupy in my heart leads me to worry.  Please take good care.” <> the wonderful mystery of loving art, which is shorthand for loving the artist’s soul which, a revelation and a relevation of one’s humanity, and character, is essential “essence” of poetry, the true power of the written word this man I likely will never meet, offers me a place in his heart, which is concomitant with responsibility of giving loving, obligatory! the one and only commandment within his  incredible simple unintended  poem on the power of giving love, or giving life through each other’s scribing, we each worked, wormed into the others heart, the repository of the energizing, acts of loving, so,powerful that they cross approximately 7300 miles as the crows flies perhaps my pessimism is unfounded, overdone, and we will yet embrace and I will (gently) bounce his granddaughter upon my knees, something, with which I possess a modicum of experience yes, I think I’ve changed, in a subtle ways; in my new heart are thousands of rooms eager awaiting roomers and boarders who need pay their voluntarily rental with simple words and even simpler acts yeah, you understand…
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Sep 6, 2023
Sep 6, 2023 at 2:47 PM UTC
From Pradip: “The place you occupy in my heart leads me to worry. Please take good care.”
From Pradip: ”The place you occupy in my heart leads me to worry.  Please take good care.” <> the wonderful mystery of loving art, which is shorthand for loving the artist’s soul which, a revelation and a relevation of one’s humanity, and character, is essential “essence” of poetry, the true power of the written word this man I likely will never meet, offers me a place in his heart, which is concomitant with responsibility of giving loving, obligatory! the one and only commandment within his  incredible simple unintended  poem on the power of giving love, or giving life through each other’s scribing, we each worked, wormed into the others heart, the repository of the energizing, acts of loving, so,powerful that they cross approximately 7300 miles as the crows flies perhaps my pessimism is unfounded, overdone, and we will yet embrace and I will (gently) bounce his granddaughter upon my knees, something, with which I possess a modicum of experience yes, I think I’ve changed, in a subtle ways; in my new heart are thousands of rooms eager awaiting roomers and boarders who need pay their voluntarily rental with simple words and even simpler acts yeah, you understand…
Augustus 18 2023 S + 2 weeks
nat-lipstadt
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99/M/NYC/Lippstadt/Kraków
Sep 6, 2023
Sep 6, 2023 at 2:47 PM UTC
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