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This shady-bar gave you more ***** than mixer, cheap spirits & rot gut elixirs flowed, some did lines of flake on the teak. By eight, most dates were sloppy drunk, buzzed, frazzled to the gills, schmoozing the feline-walk, talking **** listening to Floyd or Skynyrd. It was a circus of sorts. Back in those days we called the cops 'fuzz', they'd make their rounds every couple of hours, it made it look like they were using tax-dollars wisely, but we students knew better, ******* establishment. The parking lot was a mix of racetrack & boxing ring. Cars jammed, roared, cruised, honked their way through the fistfights. Once, I saw two sweet-babes, real rough-cats scratch and claw themselves to near death. The flowered-blouse on one was ripped clean off, one of her ***** hung out, it looked bruised. Blood streamed down both of their faces, ruining their mascara. When I look back, it's quite amazing any of us survived that freaking place. Now come to think of it, the last time I saw my buddy Marcus was outside that nasty-drinking-establishment. He was ******* amongst the drunks & excrement. I really wonder how he survived, if he made it out of that city in one piece, alive.
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Dec 20, 2013
Dec 20, 2013 at 5:20 PM UTC
Fred's Backdoor (Drunks & Excrement)
This shady-bar gave you more ***** than mixer, cheap spirits & rot gut elixirs flowed, some did lines of flake on the teak. By eight, most dates were sloppy drunk, buzzed, frazzled to the gills, schmoozing the feline-walk, talking **** listening to Floyd or Skynyrd. It was a circus of sorts. Back in those days we called the cops 'fuzz', they'd make their rounds every couple of hours, it made it look like they were using tax-dollars wisely, but we students knew better, ******* establishment. The parking lot was a mix of racetrack & boxing ring. Cars jammed, roared, cruised, honked their way through the fistfights. Once, I saw two sweet-babes, real rough-cats scratch and claw themselves to near death. The flowered-blouse on one was ripped clean off, one of her ***** hung out, it looked bruised. Blood streamed down both of their faces, ruining their mascara. When I look back, it's quite amazing any of us survived that freaking place. Now come to think of it, the last time I saw my buddy Marcus was outside that nasty-drinking-establishment. He was ******* amongst the drunks & excrement. I really wonder how he survived, if he made it out of that city in one piece, alive.
jonny-angel
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Dec 20, 2013
Dec 20, 2013 at 5:20 PM UTC
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