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The war of words. Mine versus Yours … for sparkles NOW ? Why do you even read if all you want to do is hear yourself? You need someone else to tell you what to think and feel. Try and find some deeper meaning that someone else has figured out for you ? , that you could staple onto your own meaningless unfulfilled excuse for a life. Or worse yet, quote me as you trying to pass yourself off as brilliant. What, did you spend 15 minutes of one day thinking that art was supposed to be or do for you? Are you one of those coddled little ***** sycophants? Whose mommy never stopped providing a V chip safe space for? Have you spent your whole life never being challenged? Moping around, pilled up and complaining about being offended from one participation trophy to another… ( no I’m not a Republican, Karen ) Did you think that life was all supposed to be roses are red violets are blue? That I'm here to enlighten or entertain you ? to feed you dopamine? Another pat on the head. This isn't tick tock At least not yet , Elliot was a hero for years but now I have to swipe right like and subscribe for what ? Sparkles ? Am I 10 ? Stars ? Too bad you couldn’t make them tin foil and gold right ? Wow… reduce my art to a shallow popularity beg SHAME.
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Mar 24
Mar 24, 2026 at 12:09 AM UTC
You want stars? Make them tin foil. Gold & Empty .child clapping at a puppet show.
The war of words. Mine versus Yours … for sparkles NOW ? Why do you even read if all you want to do is hear yourself? You need someone else to tell you what to think and feel. Try and find some deeper meaning that someone else has figured out for you ? , that you could staple onto your own meaningless unfulfilled excuse for a life. Or worse yet, quote me as you trying to pass yourself off as brilliant. What, did you spend 15 minutes of one day thinking that art was supposed to be or do for you? Are you one of those coddled little ***** sycophants? Whose mommy never stopped providing a V chip safe space for? Have you spent your whole life never being challenged? Moping around, pilled up and complaining about being offended from one participation trophy to another… ( no I’m not a Republican, Karen ) Did you think that life was all supposed to be roses are red violets are blue? That I'm here to enlighten or entertain you ? to feed you dopamine? Another pat on the head. This isn't tick tock At least not yet , Elliot was a hero for years but now I have to swipe right like and subscribe for what ? Sparkles ? Am I 10 ? Stars ? Too bad you couldn’t make them tin foil and gold right ? Wow… reduce my art to a shallow popularity beg SHAME.
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Mar 24
Mar 24, 2026 at 12:09 AM UTC
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