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I hope you wore a sweater, in your favorite shade of blue. It gets cold in late November, _(it gets darker faster, too)_ I hope the shoes you wore fit snugly _(even if your socks don't match)_ I hope your last day wasn't ugly, I hope the pain was over fast. I'm sure you felt your sadness deeply, I'm sure you felt your heart ache too. When you took a walk when all were sleeping, in your favorite shade of blue. I wonder what it felt like, to pick the perfect tree. To end your painful heartache, snug shoes on dangling feet. But my most pressing question, that I would ask of you, is where did you lose your earbud? _(you're wearing one, not two)_ They moved you to the metal table, _(the one that tilts down at an angle)_ They cut the sweater off you too, your favorite one in midnight blue. They make their notes: your weight, your height. They check your shoulder width and write: "He will fit a standard casket" _(they carry on with their assessment)_ "Rope indentation - on the neck Eyes and fingers - blue and red Socks mismatching Nike shoes One earbud gone" _(that's all I knew)_ Tell me why'd you take that walk? I know the road ahead looked bare. Tell me how you chose a song. Did you brush your teeth and comb your hair? Did it happen on a school night? _(your file says you were in 12th grade)_ Did you tell your mom you loved her? - with your mind already made. So to the boy with just one earbud, I'm sorry this world felt so wrong. I hope you're in your favorite sweater, and you're listening to your favorite song.
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Dec 10, 2023
Dec 10, 2023 at 8:44 AM UTC
to the boy with one earbud
I hope you wore a sweater, in your favorite shade of blue. It gets cold in late November, _(it gets darker faster, too)_ I hope the shoes you wore fit snugly _(even if your socks don't match)_ I hope your last day wasn't ugly, I hope the pain was over fast. I'm sure you felt your sadness deeply, I'm sure you felt your heart ache too. When you took a walk when all were sleeping, in your favorite shade of blue. I wonder what it felt like, to pick the perfect tree. To end your painful heartache, snug shoes on dangling feet. But my most pressing question, that I would ask of you, is where did you lose your earbud? _(you're wearing one, not two)_ They moved you to the metal table, _(the one that tilts down at an angle)_ They cut the sweater off you too, your favorite one in midnight blue. They make their notes: your weight, your height. They check your shoulder width and write: "He will fit a standard casket" _(they carry on with their assessment)_ "Rope indentation - on the neck Eyes and fingers - blue and red Socks mismatching Nike shoes One earbud gone" _(that's all I knew)_ Tell me why'd you take that walk? I know the road ahead looked bare. Tell me how you chose a song. Did you brush your teeth and comb your hair? Did it happen on a school night? _(your file says you were in 12th grade)_ Did you tell your mom you loved her? - with your mind already made. So to the boy with just one earbud, I'm sorry this world felt so wrong. I hope you're in your favorite sweater, and you're listening to your favorite song.
Written after reviewing a morgue case of a young boy who left the world too soon
ivy-rose
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Dec 10, 2023
Dec 10, 2023 at 8:44 AM UTC
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