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You saw Benny on the bus; he sat at the back on a side seat; he was with another boy, you saw him over your shoulder as you turned around. The bus came to the Elephant and Castle, Benny got off the seat, said goodbye to the other boy, stood at the back of the bus until it stopped, and he got off. You got off after him and followed up behind him. Hello Benny, you said. He turned and said: Hi Fay, where did you come from? I was on the bus, you said. I didn’t see you, he said. You both walked to the crossing and waited. Why was you on the bus? He asked. I had to visit a convent so I can write about it, you said. How is school? He said. It is all right, you said, not telling him about the Seven Deadly Sins you had to talk about at school. How's your old man? Benny said, still going on his religious retreats? You looked at him by the crossing, at his hazel eyes, that quiff of brown hair. Yes he is going next month, you said. The traffic stopped, you both crossed the road towards Meadow Row. What did you learn at school today? You asked him. Not a lot, he said, what about you? You wasn't sure whether to say about the Seven Deadly Sins. You paused, he stopped and looked at you. What is it? He said. We learned about the Seven Deadly Sins, you said. He looked across the bomb site on your left. What are they? He said. Well there is sloth, envy, greed gluttony, wrath, pride and lust, you said. Quite a lot, he said. Yes they are deadly, you said, unless one is absolved of these, one can go to Hell. He looked at you; I like your hair free flowing, he said, it adds to your beauty. Benny, you said, I am being serious. He frowned; I do understand what you say, but what can I do about it? He said, I haven't those kind of things. You smiled: no I guess not, you said. He walked on, you walked beside him, wanting to hold his hand, but you didn't, you listened while he talked of the cinema and going there at the weekend. Can you go? He said. I'll have to ask my dad, you said. Benny nodded, you walked over Rockingham Street, wishing your lips and his could secretly and softly meet.
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Dec 5, 2016
Dec 5, 2016 at 3:05 PM UTC
MEETING BENNY 1960
You saw Benny on the bus; he sat at the back on a side seat; he was with another boy, you saw him over your shoulder as you turned around. The bus came to the Elephant and Castle, Benny got off the seat, said goodbye to the other boy, stood at the back of the bus until it stopped, and he got off. You got off after him and followed up behind him. Hello Benny, you said. He turned and said: Hi Fay, where did you come from? I was on the bus, you said. I didn’t see you, he said. You both walked to the crossing and waited. Why was you on the bus? He asked. I had to visit a convent so I can write about it, you said. How is school? He said. It is all right, you said, not telling him about the Seven Deadly Sins you had to talk about at school. How's your old man? Benny said, still going on his religious retreats? You looked at him by the crossing, at his hazel eyes, that quiff of brown hair. Yes he is going next month, you said. The traffic stopped, you both crossed the road towards Meadow Row. What did you learn at school today? You asked him. Not a lot, he said, what about you? You wasn't sure whether to say about the Seven Deadly Sins. You paused, he stopped and looked at you. What is it? He said. We learned about the Seven Deadly Sins, you said. He looked across the bomb site on your left. What are they? He said. Well there is sloth, envy, greed gluttony, wrath, pride and lust, you said. Quite a lot, he said. Yes they are deadly, you said, unless one is absolved of these, one can go to Hell. He looked at you; I like your hair free flowing, he said, it adds to your beauty. Benny, you said, I am being serious. He frowned; I do understand what you say, but what can I do about it? He said, I haven't those kind of things. You smiled: no I guess not, you said. He walked on, you walked beside him, wanting to hold his hand, but you didn't, you listened while he talked of the cinema and going there at the weekend. Can you go? He said. I'll have to ask my dad, you said. Benny nodded, you walked over Rockingham Street, wishing your lips and his could secretly and softly meet.
A BOY AND GIRL IN LONDON IN 1960
TerryCollett
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Dec 5, 2016
Dec 5, 2016 at 3:05 PM UTC
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