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You look like a fire escape in a dress Flower patterned Sunday's best I don't have to fall so hard anymore The first night I held you I dug your neck into a trench This body was not at war with itself Your shoulders are battlements Your chest a drawbridge I am waiting Horseless For you to let me in I know you are so much softer than that Lay across me again gorgeous Let me sleep under your strength
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Dec 4, 2012
Dec 4, 2012 at 4:08 PM UTC
Sanctuary
You look like a fire escape in a dress Flower patterned Sunday's best I don't have to fall so hard anymore The first night I held you I dug your neck into a trench This body was not at war with itself Your shoulders are battlements Your chest a drawbridge I am waiting Horseless For you to let me in I know you are so much softer than that Lay across me again gorgeous Let me sleep under your strength
The excersize was to describe a location and write about it like it were the safest place in the world without using words like safe or sanctuary. I could not for the life of me think of a place I felt safe. I wrote about a body instead. This is called a sanctuary poem.
jon-tobias
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Dec 4, 2012
Dec 4, 2012 at 4:08 PM UTC
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