Hello Poetry
Submit your work and get some sparkles! Create free account
Around me are trains, going everywhere with people of means Huddled in their puffy coats, face glistening from kisses The snow on eyelashes of haze, making them cry For something in their lives stays silent and loud All I see is just a blur, clearly the movements of a crowd The train arrives clack clack clack clack clack cla-         I sit next to a man, broad sloping shoulders         Staring at bright coloured slogans against the harbor         My eyes noticed them, and linoleum floors abundant         his child, bubblegum candy in her hair, eyes closed         and our ears are attracted to her breathing         A boy in blue against the blurry water view         Raises his eye upwards, grinning         With a paper patch, a Crayola work of gauze         Fatherly hands ruffle the head, both smile         and *yo ** yo ** a pirate’s life for...* My mind jerks back to what it once was The conductor’s voice seeps through the corridors A toned down velvet mixed with earthly undertones As we all stepped back to ground, and the platform        carries away the distance in something so close
0
Feb 13, 2013
Feb 13, 2013 at 5:03 PM UTC
From Green to Red
Around me are trains, going everywhere with people of means Huddled in their puffy coats, face glistening from kisses The snow on eyelashes of haze, making them cry For something in their lives stays silent and loud All I see is just a blur, clearly the movements of a crowd The train arrives clack clack clack clack clack cla-         I sit next to a man, broad sloping shoulders         Staring at bright coloured slogans against the harbor         My eyes noticed them, and linoleum floors abundant         his child, bubblegum candy in her hair, eyes closed         and our ears are attracted to her breathing         A boy in blue against the blurry water view         Raises his eye upwards, grinning         With a paper patch, a Crayola work of gauze         Fatherly hands ruffle the head, both smile         and *yo ** yo ** a pirate’s life for...* My mind jerks back to what it once was The conductor’s voice seeps through the corridors A toned down velvet mixed with earthly undertones As we all stepped back to ground, and the platform        carries away the distance in something so close
My observations on a train one day. Noticeable were the people around me, as each individual tells a story through expression and interaction. That day I noticed parent and child interactions, whom are possibly given difficult situations. The feeling of motion and movement.
cecilia-kwong
Written by
Feb 13, 2013
Feb 13, 2013 at 5:03 PM UTC
Request permission to use this poem